望著遙遠星辰

美樂譜著

人心漸漸沉澱

兮也

天廣闊無際引人

一聲長嘯

方解心上憂

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第一次挑戰隱題詩

看倌們

給點意見吧

我會感謝你的！

(睡前突然冒出這句話
然後就把它寫成隱題詩)

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  • #1 影 on 2008/09/13 18:25

  • 是"望美人兮天一方"吧
  • 是呀
    我剛剛才突然想到= =
    OK地
    我改一下黑

    hotym93replied on 2008/09/14 10:52

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